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    dots Submission Name: Hear me.dots
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    Author: RyukiTZR
    ASL Info:    14/F/-
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 133/130/44
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 263
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 794



    Description:
       Look, I have not posted for quite some time.. so you can say I'm kinda rusty. =P

    Well, the objects in here are.. sorta my favourite stuff, so yea. My reason: Empty.


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    dotsHear me.dots
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    Everytime
    Out alone I am,
    Either shut up and wilt away,
    Or I'd pour on people
    Hidden, awful
    Indescribable mood swings.


    Hear me.


    To be
    Accused as I'd done
    Nothing,
    Feels harder to breathe
    Each time, and the more I
    Kill. Whoever I love.


    Hear me.


    Strumming,
    Plucking the strings
    Of unknown emotions,
    Listen, or mute on heart-wrecked
    Headphones
    Was my guitar.


    Hear me.


    Knock knock?
    Doodles on door; mine.
    The black, blood and violent
    Purple, all in
    Confused fury, I paint them
    Alive.

    Hear me.




    Submitted on 2006-07-15 01:32:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ok... this is a tough one.. alright, that made absolutly no sense at all! what in the heck were you talking about? to me it seemed like you were just babbling about as you went along. i dont know who told you that was poetry, but its not! maybe i might be wrong, you know everyone has an opinion, and opinions are like [censored]s we all got them and all of 'em stink. but anyway, i would like to know what this was about... because you lost me. big time!!! you lost me, well, at the first word.... ...
    | Posted on 2006-07-15 00:00:00 | by psycotic cowboy | [ Reply to This ]



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