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    dots Submission Name: Chemicals for the <3 and Souldots
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    Author: alyssathetiger
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 3/2/3
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    dotsChemicals for the <3 and Souldots
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    My heart is abeyant, but Iím wearing it on my sleeve.
    Stupid? Most likely, but itís not like it matters.
    Iím used to pain and agony, my heart has been broken so much. There's nothing I can do, but drink too much.

    Baby I love you, nothing can change that. You can't ever forget that.
    the scent of chemicals is always with me, a permanent look of pain on my face
    I tip back the bottle, close my eyes, and wait for my heart to end this race.

    You took my heart, broke it in two.
    You took my soul, how can I ever forgive you?
    But the chemicals help me dull the pain,
    I don't know what I expect to gain.

    Baby I love you, nothing can change that. You can't ever forget that.
    the scent of chemicals is always with me, a permanent look of pain on my face
    I tip back the bottle, close my eyes, and wait for my heart to end this race.

    (in background screaming: Iím taking chemicals for my heart and soul)
    Powder, plants, liquid, pills
    I take them all, but they just wonít kill.
    I'll just close my eyes and pray I'll never wake up.
    I hope I die by the bottom of this cup.

    Baby I love you, nothing can change that. You can't ever forget that.
    the scent of chemicals is always with me, a permanent look of pain on my face
    I tip back the bottle, close my eyes, and wait for my heart to end this race.




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