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Author: mcgovern_xiii
ASL Info:    35/M/NewEngland
Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 70 /91 /26
Words: 38
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I accept the challenge and this is my attempt at not writing in the first person.


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Of hollow and curved
eroded stone.

Only time has truly known.

These river front properties
to be theirs alone.

No matter what man
Shall claim them his own.

McGovern/2004




Submitted on 2004-05-16 18:50:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hmmm... i dunno. i dont feel like this really got anywhere. these phrases by themselves were fine, but together...they didn't really flow for me. perhaps i'll come back and look over it again later.
-dandan
| Posted on 2004-05-16 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]


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