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I am just a girl with a horrible life and as I stand here crying while holding this knife I slide it down my arm digging in deep it's the only way I'll be able to sleep I'm tired of crying I'm tired of screaming sometimes I think that I am dreaming but I have to realize this is not a dream and everything is as it seems so in my failure I begin to bask I don't know why I'm like this so just don't ask |
This was written very well. It flowed amazingly, and the rhyme was great. I can relate, I've was there not long ago, so I can offer some advice. Don't look at the dark side of life peek into the better side. I know at times it may seem that there isn't one, but there is. You just have to search for it. Great write. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading. Always, XE.L.M.X | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by heartofxwinterx | [ Reply to This ] | |