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    dots Submission Name: Thinking of uyoudots
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    Author: JTrickly
    ASL Info:    23/female/
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 10/4/13
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 962
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 702



    Description:
       Okay I know it;'s crappy but I'm workig on it. I's a song that was inspired by another song I remember fearing as a little girl. So take that into consideration when reading this.
    It's a love song of some one in great adoration.


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    dotsThinking of uyoudots
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    (Chorus)
    Thinking of you
    In the afternoon [afternoon]
    Thinking of loving you in the evening
    Day Dreaming [day-dreaming]
    (verse)
    YOu're all that I'm thinking of
    YOu're always on my mind
    I just wanna let you know
    you're love is one of a klnd
    I guess that's why you're always lingering in my mind
    Oh I'm (Chorus)
    Nothing else could ever change the way I feel [for you]
    My love is Oh so true [for you]
    YOu're love means the world to me so baby I just hope you see that no one else can do just what you do
    That's why I'm...
    (chorus) 2x




    Submitted on 2006-07-16 00:47:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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