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Scent (part 1)

Author: rachel gless
ASL Info:    23/f/mx
Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 68 /89 /37
Words: 390
Class/Type: Prose /Passion
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It's a story I'm starting I was wondering if it was good enough to keep writing. It has been a long time since I don't write anything I was kinda blocked, hope I get a fresh, good, new start. Lets see what you think!

Scent (part 1)

They looked at each other with lover eyes, even when they weren’t lovers yet. They both stood still for a moment at the threshold. He knew that once he walked through the door it wasn’t going to be easy to control himself, and he didn’t want to push her into anything she wasn’t prepared, although he wanted her so badly. She knew that things would change once he entered her apartment. She wasn’t quite sure what she wanted but by looking at him her body just longed to be his and her heart loved him so much.
He took her in his arms and kicked the door shut embracing her in the deepest kiss of her whole life. They stood there, next to the door just kissing. They had waited for this moment for a long time. Finally they were alone; there was no one here to bother them. He touched her back up and down and pushed her head against his to make this kiss deeper so it would last forever. Since their first kiss he hadn’t been able to stop kissing her, even in his dreams he longed to push his lips against hers. She held on to his neck with both of her hands, as if she was begging him not to stop; ever. Both of them with their eyes perfectly shut drowned in their own magical, passionate world when only tem existed.
The kiss faded and they just looked at each other for a minute. The passion that irradiated from their eyes could be felt in the air. She had no doubts now, she wanted to be his. He hesitated when she walked him to her room. He loved her so much and he didn’t want her to make any decision she might regret later, mostly if he would be responsible of such decision. She could see his love, and that made her be sure, so she let him know that.
After many long kisses in her bed they were ready to make love as the lovers that have always longed to be.

Her bed had his scent. She smiled when she realized she still had his scent as well. He smelled so manly and sweet at the same time; exactly like his personality. And he was hers, her lover.

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