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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 830
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 162



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       Came to me while I was in bed lol


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    Hand pick an anomatopia
    Push IT into repetition
    Smother IT into alliteration
    Recreate That into a simile
    Watch it grow into a metaphor




    Submitted on 2006-07-16 13:15:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very interesting, very short, very to the point. It says alot in a small amount of space which is good. Continue to do new and interesting things through your writings.
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      Liked it... describes a particular technique, or model, of writing something... reminds me a little of some rappers style... well written... shalini bridges
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by sbridges | [ Reply to This ]


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