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    dots Submission Name: Someone elsedots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



    Description:
       This poem was written because I am going through a lot right now and really it is just life. Everyone goes through it eventually, but I guess everything is just hitting me so hard right now I just break down. One of the main things is that I am moving out on my own away from my parents here soon and getting a job.


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    dotsSomeone elsedots
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    If someone else could feel my pain
    I bet this pain would be lighter,
    if someone elsecould feel my strain
    I bet I could be a better fighter.

    Not much people could handle this
    they'd loose it all in just one day,
    but to me this is just simpleness
    but if someone else felt my pain they'd never have another word to say.

    Life could be so much harder
    if you think this is hard;walk in the shoes of someone else,
    and I bet they'd tell you your life couldn't be easier
    so grab life by the horns and live.




    Submitted on 2006-07-16 17:18:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, very good. I could feel the...emotion just by reading the poem. I like it, in a way I can say I know what you're talking about. The last sentence to me kind of said everything will be alright eventually and it will. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Foreseer | [ Reply to This ]



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