What You Make Me Feel
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Well, I sort of felt this way about a guy in school.
What You Make Me Feel
You see me yet, I go by. You know me yet, I just hide. You know I care for you but you don't say a word. My friends say you do too, it's hard to say for real. You sit by me and give me that smile. How can I resist you? I guess it's my heart that calls for you. I don't want to feel this way. If it means falling at your feet. I'm not that type of girl. I don't give myself away that easily. |
Submitted on 2006-07-16 21:59:19 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| great poem! really conveys good emotion but i think it ends really abruptly. it flows really well and then its like it just drops off.... i just felt like it needed some closure. all in all, i really liked tho. ~Shadia | Posted on 2006-09-18 00:00:00 | by Shadia Dark | [ Reply to This ] | |  I can relate to this poem only because i have a friend who likes me but hates to see me because he can't flirt and I get butterflys in my stomach and I cry and I flirt somewhat.Jessica p.s this is a good one going to make it a fav. | Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by jslbabygirl101 | [ Reply to This ] | I liked it. In a way it kinda reminded me of myself... like how I guess I don't want to fall "head over heels" just by a flattering word or a nice smile... hmm.. I don't know if I had wrote that if I would have done anything differently.. .but eh I liked the phrase "I'm not that type of girl" it brought out separation... individuality... =] | | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by MidnightMelody | [ Reply to This ] | like yeah poem ma seem like im the person you talking bout i use to be just like that but liked it keep writing | | Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by Ghetto_King | [ Reply to This ] | I really like this poem. Its amazing cause all my 9th grade year i felt this way towards this guy. And i hurd so many things he liked me to. But he never askd me out. It hurt me alot after it but i moved on and now we are best friends and before when i liked him i could barely talk to him now i tell him everything lol. | keep this up i like it alot. <3 Brittaney-Mae | Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ] | i really liked this one....in a way i can relate! so good job! | Brittany | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by dark_secrets_ | [ Reply to This ] | |
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