great poem! really conveys good emotion but i think it ends really abruptly. it flows really well and then its like it just drops off.... i just felt like it needed some closure. all in all, i really liked tho.
I liked it. In a way it kinda reminded me of myself... like how I guess I don't want to fall "head over heels" just by a flattering word or a nice smile... hmm.. I don't know if I had wrote that if I would have done anything differently.. .but eh I liked the phrase "I'm not that type of girl" it brought out separation... individuality... =]
I really like this poem. Its amazing cause all my 9th grade year i felt this way towards this guy. And i hurd so many things he liked me to. But he never askd me out. It hurt me alot after it but i moved on and now we are best friends and before when i liked him i could barely talk to him now i tell him everything lol. keep this up i like it alot.