Short and sweet but there is a mystery to it. I spend a lot of time on the road and times I feel as if I am driving into the unknown. The highway seems endless at times save for the fact that I have a destination. I guess if it is late at night it seems as if the raod has no end and because of the darkness it looks like we are driving into the unknown
Oh my gosh. This piece is amazing to me. First of all, my Dad had a friend who was driving down his side of the road and then a driver fell asleep at the wheel and slammed into him head on killing him. That story is what this piece reminded me of.
It really irks me when people do not want to fly or go on boats or things like that but they will jump in their car like it ain't nothing. First of all, you are more likely to get into a car wreck than you are an airplane crash or boating accident. So, this piece really speaks to me. I always feel anxious driving at night and on the interstate because of those weary drivers on the road who have been driving for hours and hours.
Wow, probably not making any sense. Well, one thing is for sure - this was original and well put together. Good one.
Jeesh, this too is good. This is the second poem I read from you today, and I love this one too! It just says like a million different things, at one point, and I can see the different colored headlights driving down the highway, and it's sort of eerie, but it's good. I think like HaldirLives said, you like the reader to make what they will of your poem, especially those who miss the description. You're sort of like an abstract artist. Anyhow, really great write. Walk in Love and Light, ~Azura*
Once again, short and to the point. I love your style. It is very abstract and creative. I like the idea that the partition is meant as a barrier for the psyche, not the body. But, again, I don't think I would have understood what you were talking about without your note. Again, I think I like it that way. You seem to really put thought into your poems, and then actually say something with them. I wish there were more poets like you around here. -HaldirLives
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