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    dots Submission Name: Empty Nestdots
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    Author: Saimi Marie
    ASL Info:    18/f/Columbia, MO
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 42/42/22
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 895
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 643



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       This is just a testament to my life right now. Enjoy! And just tell me what you think.


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    dotsEmpty Nestdots
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    Yesterday i left my nest.
    So here i am looking for a place to rest.

    A place to clear my head.
    And a chance to seep in all the words you said.

    I get the since that you miss me.
    But i need to tell you, just leave me be.

    If destiny has any say i'll find my way back.
    So be warned because my return might sting like a smack.

    Don't worry Mama this journey will end soon.
    I'll be back in the nest before a new moon.

    Until then this bird will keep to herself and find out how far she was born to fly.






    Submitted on 2006-07-17 16:34:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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