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point blank.

Author: fbeat
ASL Info:    15/female/ca
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Class/Type: Lyrics /Venting
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made up in a jiffy.

point blank.

"i'll be there for you, if you'll be there for me"
open your own damn eyes, im not there to see.
for you,
for me.
for everything we need.
you can forget it.

junctions stop the traffic.
guns stop the pain.
tears start the lying.
and children go insane.

from bestfrineds

to deadfriends

to dead ends.

to love and to lies,
to birthday time and silent drives.
to postcards, to letters, no replies.
to wishing wells and hazey skies.

to the broken heart,

and every broken beat.

to lost time.

to every tear we bring.

to you.
to me.
to something we all need.

so sit back
watch the show
blow my brains out
watch it flow.
cannons ready, load it up.
light the fire.
this time i say
enough is enough.
the gunshot.
the sound i desire.

Submitted on 2006-07-18 02:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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