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G'Morning


Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 131
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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g'morning. a little poem i wrote in the essence of a morning.


G'Morning



G'Morning ... G'Morning
my fellow friends.

Today is another day we shall cherish together...
forever and ever I love shall stay
once again through another beautiful day
where the clouds are gone
and the sun is bright.

G'Morning... G'Morning
my loved ones.

Today you might be mad, sad or glad
but what counts is whether or not you choose to be mad, sad or glad.

I think I'm choose glad for in other's eyes its like icecream. Yummy. Deliscious. Everyone wants a little bit.

G'Morning ... G'Morning

May your day be well. May your spirits be high. May you acccomplish all that you need to do. May your day be filled with peace.

Shalom.




Submitted on 2006-07-18 09:11:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm glad you wrote that.
| Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by Full Truth | [ Reply to This ]
  Very nice poem - managed to make me smile as i read it. Great structure - i think this is one of the most 'perfect' poems i have read so far. G'Night :P
| Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]


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