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    dots Submission Name: I never gave you my heartdots

    Author: Kay
    ASL Info:    15/f/
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 216/197/68
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI never gave you my heartdots

    So what if i'm wrong. Its not like i've known you for that long. Its not like i have any special feelings for you.

    "yes baby i love you too"

    funny how you believe the words that never meant anything to me. so much for this happy ending?

    you're just one of those other boys
    you're just one of those other toys
    that i can play with, keep me company while i'm alone
    i draw the smiles on my face and lock my heart safetly in my home
    so when you decide to move on, it woudn't brake
    while your tasty kiss becomes my perfect shame

    Let me pretend
    i know i'm not in your head
    you are just another boy
    out there to try to break my apart
    so sad
    because i never gave you my heart

    Submitted on 2006-07-19 02:27:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow. Amazing. I feel the same way! I'm trying to deny the fact that I fell for him. I'm ashamed I let myself be vulnerable. But I know deep down, that it hurts, although I rarely admit it. Really nice poem! I loved it.
    | Posted on 2007-03-30 00:00:00 | by roses | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm, I'm sensing some inner strength and payback to the male part of the human race for every time they've hurt you?

    If that's the way of it, then you go! Got your back 140%, give or take some! Hehe. This piece flowed very well, and you weren't afraid to put what you were thinking. The speaking part really worked for me at the beginning. Playing with their mind a bit? Why not? They play with something much more valuable when they play with us! They play with our hearts!

    Thanks for your commenton my piece too! It's always appreciated!

    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      Yay! 14-year-old-boys FTW! <3

    Okay I'm sorry. :3 I guess I can relate. I like cranky hate-breakup poems. I want more. I want one that's bloody and gorey and yet...

    okay okay. I'm done. kthx.

    | Posted on 2006-07-19 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
      damn teenage lovers and their nonsense. i kinda understand this one. it seems like u really like this guy but u won't let him get close enough for u to fall in love cuz u think he's just out to hurt u so u lock ur heart away so when u do break up, u'll be fine. but ur mad at urself cuz u never really gave him a chance at love.

    good to see u back. i was wondering what happened to u
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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