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    dots Submission Name: My minddots
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    Author: Jesimine
    ASL Info:    19/female/australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 64/96/20
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Trapped
    Total Views: 900
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1147



    Description:
       Just some random thoughts of mine. think what you will and say what you want i don't mind.


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    dotsMy minddots
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    Paranoia... the be all and end all of my life. The constant checking and re-checking. Constantly looking over my shoulder.

    The Whispering... was there ever a time when i was without it. Always hearing them talking to me.

    Hallucinations... the passing shadows that frighten me into a paranoia frenzy. when will they stop.

    The Therapy... is it really helping. No. I always believed it would but i am beyond help now.

    The worst thing about all of it is that i have grown comfortable with it. I don't know what i would do without the paranoia, it brings me comfort to know i am always prepared. The whispering is what keeps me from being lonely because it is always there. My world is different because of these things. Would i change it all if i could. No.

    So, i guess the real question is am i crazy? To everyone but me.... Yes.
    I don't think i am crazy... to be alone would be crazy.... to not be prepared would be crazy.

    So.... think about it. Would you rather be these things and be called crazy, or would you rather be 'normal'?




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