A Winner's Creed by Full Truth

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Author:	Full Truth
ASL Info:	22/M/TX
Elite Ratio:	8 - 20/2/1
Words:	87

Class/Type:	Personal Quotes/Misc
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A Winner's Creed dots

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"If you think you are beaten, you are;
If you think you dare not, you don't;
If you'd like to win, but think you can't,
It's almost a cinch you won't.

If you think you'll lose, you're lost;
For out in the world we find
Success begins with a person's will,
It's all in the state of mind

Life's battles don't always go
To the stonger or faster hand;
But soner or later the person who wins
Is the one who thinks, 'I can'."--Unknown Author

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This piece is so true. . . .. . .well . . . . it is very realistic. I can really relate to it. This part was my favourite part out of the whole thing:

"If you think you are beaten, you are;
If you think you dare not, you don't;
If you'd like to win, but think you can't,
It's almost a cinch you won't.

I thought that you were trying to let the truth be known. . . . . . . like you were trying to let everybody in on a secret or somethin. . . . . . . I don't know. Well . . . . . anyways. . . . . I thought hat this piece was great. Nice one.

~ G Freak ~

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| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
For the most part a fairly good write. I few typos but thats ok.
I guess what I am trying to say is that they are really words to live by if taken to heart.

History takes us back and these words can be related to the old west.

Life's battles don't always go
To the stonger or faster hand;
But soner or later the person who wins
Is the one who thinks, 'I can'

These words remind me of a gun fighter in the old west. They would ring true then.

Well I have rambled on to much.

Keep writing

Nice job

Respect and Admiration

Clyde
| Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]

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