Love's Erotic Dream
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Love's Erotic Dream
" Love's Erotic Dream" I want to tease you I want to please you I want to show you My love is true. I want to kiss your Lips so sweet, I Want to sweep you Off your feet. I want to feel the essence In your soul, My body Wants to feel yours out of Control. I want to show you baby That I need you, I want to make your dreams come True. I want to let you feel my Fire, I want to make your Flames burn higher. I want to take you right Out of your dreams, My Love wants to hear your Passions scream. I want to treat you like a King, I want to give to you all I am everything. I want to take your ecstasy To the top, I want to keep Going til your body says Stop. Written By: Wilma S. Hill copyright@2006 Ladymustang's Poetry |
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This is terriffic, Wilma! I love your lovemaking poetry (and all of the rest of your work, as well)!!!| | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ] | Hey Wilma | Nice one!! Everyone longs for the sensation of true passion and you have captured that quite well in this piece. I particularly like this stanza: 'I want to feel the essence In your soul, My body Wants to feel yours out of Control.' It tells the reader that this passion knows no bounds and that the pair want to give everything to this lustful moment. Good work Love it a lot 'On On' Ocker | Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by Ocker7290 | [ Reply to This ] | This was really good. A truely erotic poem, with good use of words. You have quite a way with words. Good write, really hot and sensual. Keep it up |  Cami | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ] | Hi! This poem reminds me of my poem "Feeling You", if you have the time someday, read it. I loved this, it very passionate, sexual and erotic in a subtle and "comfortable" way. In terms of writing, I noticed you repeated "I want to" many times, which didn't really bother me, but it could be changed. My favorite part is: "I want to take you right | Out of your dreams, My Love wants to hear your Passions scream." That's very intense! and I love it. I liked the way you had with words. Keep it up! | Posted on 2006-07-19 00:00:00 | by April0414 | [ Reply to This ] | Is it getting HOT in here!?! WOW! This was very erotic and sometimes out of control? I like reading your poem you never know what your going to read? Thanks for the read! | Kelley Frost | Posted on 2006-07-19 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | This is really good | You ventured into the erotic with this write I really like hoiw you did not go to far in describing just what a beautiful sexual relationship would be like That is a credit to you I enjoyed this I Look forward to reading more new writes from you God Bless Ron | Posted on 2006-07-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |
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