Awe this is cute! Very imaginative and creative! I felt the same way once but let go cause I knew there was nothing going to happen they looked at me as a friend so nicely written yet sad enough to feel.
I liked it a lot. I tihnk that it could have been classified more under Random Thoughts than Poetry, but other than that I don't know how you could make it better. Good Job. Love is hard to deal with. Good job and Keep up the great writing and stuff. ~Caotic~