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    dots Submission Name: Karmadots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 254
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 850
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1209



    Description:
       My feelings about how things have been going for me.


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    dotsKarmadots
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    Good people who wark hard get what they deserve. It may take a while for karma to kick in but when it does it pays to have good karma. If you always feel you need to please people this is for you. ood karma builds up and redeems randomly. If you are always taken advantage of because you are too nice, this is for you. Good karma comes around. If you are too nice for your own good, this is for you. A karmic poem to make everything o.k.

    Like good karma, bad karma comes too. If you tend to yell at tiny stupid things this is for you, be careful. If you get pissed off when things don't go your way, this is for you, be careful. Bad karma is scary. If you are mean, karma is mean back. It is an eye for an eye with karma. Karma will bite you in the ass if you are not careful. If you steal from old people or ignore your children because of a selfish addiction this is for you, be careful. If you care more about money than your family this is for you, be careful. If you force your religious bull shit on others this is for you, be careful. If you gamble, smoke, drink, or drug excessivley this is for you, be careful. What goes around comes around and that is the truth!




    Submitted on 2006-07-19 20:15:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very inspirational. I sure hope your right! I've worked hard my whole life and still my life is filled with everything bad and some worse...
    Good poem though, great idea!
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by BigDreams | [ Reply to This ]


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