Its could....and i agree with wat the other person said it is a little unclear....but still really good...the way it was written holds some mystery or secret...but maybe its time to let that secret out! well anyone really good poem and i enjoyed reading...so good job....so keep up the good work!
this is really good. But to me it seems a little unclear. The last part where it says you dont think you can mention that. Maybe you should. Cause to me i know its probly hard to write about it but sometimes you got to. to get it out to make you feel better. But i still do like this keep it up! <33
I can see that you have gone through some changes that have surprised you. I like the 'Who, why and when' at the beginnning of the stanzas; and 'not wanting to see'. You never answer any of your questions and, at the end, leave no answer as to what has changed - making me think. Nice J