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    dots Submission Name: dying daydots
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    Author: 2xhatedxsoulx2
    ASL Info:    18/F/MN
    Elite Ratio:    1.24 - 44/34/24
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Angry
    Total Views: 839
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 607



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    dotsdying daydots
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    Dying day

    I sit here rotting away
    My stomach twists and turns cuz I haven't ate for days
    My wrists are cut open yet I feel no pain
    Everyone who sees me probally thinks I'm completly Insane
    But why do I care?
    It's all gonna be over soon anyway
    I screamed and cried and you still didn't go away
    You say I need help when really it's you
    You need some fucking anger management,
    Then maybe you could see what you do
    How you hurt me with every word you say
    Yelling at me, waiting for my dying day




    Submitted on 2006-07-20 02:33:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's kinda strange you can compliment yourself >.>
    | Posted on 2008-06-16 00:00:00 | by 2xhatedxsoulx2 | [ Reply to This ]
      well..maybe my best angry poem..
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by 2xhatedxsoulx2 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think this is my best poem..yep
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by 2xhatedxsoulx2 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this is one of most powerfull poems I've read! It's dark and cool...it's great.
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by Alexandra | [ Reply to This ]


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