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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       Again I wrote this over three years ago.. I think I was realizing that everyone's actions affect others... and sometimes it affects those whom you'f never think of. But its always like that.. its what you least expect that seems to always happen...


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    You hear it on the TV
    You see it in the papers
    People debate about these issues.. mostly polictis
    Its be
    Some family are more effected
    Than others
    Each min
    In everyday
    Something is happening
    Wether iis next door
    Or around the world
    Wether its good or bad
    bad or good
    Someone is born
    Someone has died
    Someone might have just been digaosned with cancer
    No matter what you are doing
    Or where you are at
    Something else is happening
    And people seem to forget
    Forget about the world around them
    And what they say
    What we all do
    It also effects the world that we all live in.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Yes, very true. I always have thought about this. You know, while someone could be having a birthday party, another person could be attending a funeral. It's an interesting topic to think about, and you explained it perfectly.

    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm....this is simply yet the message is sent clear. So, gd job on that!
    | Posted on 2006-08-11 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]


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