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Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
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I love the snow. I wish it would snow in Georgia damn it! It never snows down here....


The snowflakes fall
like paper
on my head
covered with snow
I smile
the cool air
turns my face
as red as a cherry
I feel free
I feel more alive than ever
in the cool, calm, relaxing winter

Submitted on 2006-07-20 19:36:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i was born in a snowstorm in europe and i will never forget my roots. I love the north and all its snow
this was short and simple, nothing wrong as far as i could see, it was very happy and cherry so i liked it. ^_^ i dont like that many happy peices but you got me on a weak spot for me heh
| Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]

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