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    dots Submission Name: the mutha fuckin king is backdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 917
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1070



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       I'd like to thank my special friend caffiene for helping me too write this shit


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    dotsthe mutha fuckin king is backdots
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    yo' its been a while/
    I know you missed me/
    as I'm walking down the aile/
    so many bitches jump and try to hit me/

    but as I walk by, I execute tha best/
    so when the true come around, I"m the only one left/
    I know you love my fitted, and my clothes, yes my style/

    smoke out my mouth/
    thass that blueberry black N mild/
    my cap is fitted, you know I represent the south/
    airforces with tha clown, the fucking kings is going wild/

    gotta make reference to hood/
    yeah he my homie/
    everyone said that I could/
    not, fuck yall he told me/

    what it is when it ain't/
    your fault/
    the haters talk down cause the can't/
    walk, or talk, like you talk/

    they fake/
    the funk/
    thats why the hate/
    they punks/

    but yo' I raised the stakes/
    with this paper chase.../
    I paved the way/
    just to make your day/






    Submitted on 2006-07-20 20:36:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey bubz this was k, but i prefere ur other stuff sos, i dunno wot else to say,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      my friend it is not good to smoke it makes ur lung messed up not good for u das how people get cancer anyways it was okay noy one of your best work but still ok keep it up ~1~
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, hon. Smoking's not good.
    For the song, yeah it is, but for your lungs, no.
    Anyways, I like your style. It's vain, but that's what makes it cool.

    I don't know what else to say.

    ScarlettFever
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by ScarlettFever | [ Reply to This ]
      uh uh let me find out you know about black N milds. let me find out!! lol i'm just messin, anyways this was hot, but can i have my crown back i kinda miss it haha. Anyways this is tight.

    Lady D
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      this is ok. i kinda pictured it with a very slow flow. black n milds do smell ok. glad to have u back. we got tired of seeing an empty throne.
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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