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    dots Submission Name: brought out of the darknessdots
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    Author: hatchetXrider
    ASL Info:    17/m/IN
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    i was once in the dark

    i was once of a dark heart

    i was once the one whom hated all and was hated by all

    but all that changed the once i say a goddess whom i named krystal

    her beauty shined in the light when she walked by me the first time i saw her

    her smell started to melt my heart

    i fell in love the first time i saw her

    when i first hurd her voice it chiped off ice of a cold heart.

    i saw a goddess wep and sad so i cheered her up

    that was the first of many great memories

    now i have been in the presience of a goddess for 8 great months

    i lost her once and i let her go once and i will not lose her again

    i am in love i am the one who once had a cold heart but melted

    i have never felt like this before

    she is the one who brought me out of the darkness out of the cold heart and out of the hate that once controlled me.

    now i am in the light which i can never leave

    cuz my goddess is my one and only the one who understands me

    the one who i love with all my might the one i've givin my soul and heart too.

    krystal u r that goddess you r the love of my life and i'll never stop loving you




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      uv helped me oh so much as well...thank u sooo much...ur such a beautiful writer...keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by stateXofXmind | [ Reply to This ]



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