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    dots Submission Name: Look @ how we've changed.dots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 350
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1874



    Description:
       This is a poem/rant one my best break-up that has ever happened to me. This person was my first boyfriend. Lord, I wish that some of the things we did I would have kept to myself. I have a couple more poems about the breakup. The poems have helped me heal. There are more to come. I think that this is my best work yet.

    Comments, Thoughts, would be great.


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    Did you think about every time you break my heart and how much pain you cause me? I'm sorry that I get emotional and scream, but you are killing my heart and me. As time moves on, I can see more clearly that we were never in love and everything you had said to me was multiple lies. We were just in lust, nothing special. We also had many different values. You thought that you could break me down so much that I would only want you and I couldn't stand for myself, but I'm still standing strong; stronger than you and I have ever seen or known. I've moved on, letting you know that you missed a good girl by messing around. No more day dreaming, wishing that you would come back and that you would change. This break-up has brought out the best in me. Now I can see the best of you clearly, and to me it’s an ugly sight; being a playa and trying to fit in with friends who won't even be there for you when you’re down. It's kinda funny on how we were first friends, then lovers, and now we act like we barely know each other, but it's cool because it keeps the tension down between us. It would have been better if you would have just told me the truth, instead of when I'm just finding out that you ain't wanna be with me and you are still whispering in my ear, "If I wanted that girl, then I would be with that girl; your the only one for me; she's fine as hell but she'll always be that girl." And now you are chasing that girl who was just that girl a few days ago, remember?? But it's all good cause I'm done with you and your problems forever because I'm on to someone else who will treat me right with respect and it ain't you. Look at how we've changed over time, acting as we never where what we were, it sucks doesn't it...

    NOPE!






    Submitted on 2006-07-21 13:44:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Congradulations, you've had a good break up...you've learned so much. Keep everything in mind for all of them who come in the future. Some too will be playas, and you can use this to see if he is or not. It's wonderful that you could turn this around, it's hard to do especially with a first boyfriend. Congrats again, and good luck with the future!

    ~Kat
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this
    I know this write has definately helped you heal from this faltered relationship
    I agree with you that he was never in Love with you
    Thats the feeling I get from reading this
    The good news is I can see you picked yourself up and have learned well from this
    You have in effect made a positive from a negative in your life
    That is not easy!!!
    Move forward and Please continue letting that Positive energy guide you
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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