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    dots Submission Name: Someone Else.dots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Betrayal
    Total Views: 116
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



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    This aint my best work but u know I guess I'll get opinions about it.


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    dotsSomeone Else.dots
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    I've should have known all the sign, you were showing me. And all I had to do is replace you but now I see it's getting harder to let go. Baby I had to stand up for myself cause I knew there was someone else.

    I thought that I found the one. And I thought that I gave it my all. But I guess my part wasn't being done.

    I can't really blame anyone but me. I acted like it was difficult to see. Why are you driving me insane? My cool is what I'm trying to maintain. For now I'll keep my feelings to myslef. Because you hurt me when I found out there was someone else.




    Submitted on 2006-07-21 19:00:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was ok. It could use some serious work, and I would start off by making it into a song format, not a paragraph format; it takes away from it. Like, tell us which is the verse, then the chours...it doesn't look right the way it is.

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    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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