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Ryder Of The Diaper Set


Author: junemarie
ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl.
Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66 /70 /27
Words: 113
Class/Type: Misc /Comedy
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Ryder Of The Diaper Set



Photo-----My grandson Brody

The little guy around our house
Is cool beyond compare
As we put on his jacket and wooly cap
To get out for a breath of air.

Then no sooner we're out and driving
In our oh so conservative car
He sits in his Sleepy Ryder seat
And makes like a movie star.

Our Volvo soon becomes a bike
Which gobbles up the highway
While sun and wind whip through his hair?
He roars down every byway.

And he would race the wind forever
If his diaper weren't wet
Oh woe to the image you beget...
You Ryder of the diaper set!




Submitted on 2006-07-21 20:59:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Aw, what a cutie! I love babies, and he is just adorable. I think the rhyme works well with the light theme.

Our Volvo soon becomes a bike
Which gobbles up the highway
While sun and wind whip through his hair?

I don't think you need the question mark.

Oh woe to the image you beget...
You Ryder of the diaper set!

I also don't think you need the ellipsis, but I admit that they're so overused that I sometimes react negatively even when they are appropriate. I suppose it's because I actually read more poems with them than without them on this site.

Nicely done,
Amy
| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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