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Friendship


Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 45
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
Total Views: 1104
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Friendship



Friendship is not a game
who is the best or
who is the worst;
it is not the survival of the fittest.

It is the companionship of
two friends who have
bared their souls, but
have not misunderstood the
other by one's own sinfullness.




Submitted on 2006-07-21 22:36:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I completely agree with you its ot a game. I love this poem it should be made into the offical rules to friendship. I like the whole poem its nice short and puts the message right in the readers face :)

-darkeveris
| Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by darkeveris | [ Reply to This ]


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