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The Line


Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Description:


short and bored.


The Line



The shadows of the sunlit windows
remind me of my days when I'd
do anything just to be loved.

The slowly creeping sunlight tells
a hard learned story of how over time
my immaturity started to wear off.

When hath I crossed the line from
immaturity to mature?

That line is not yet defined.




Submitted on 2006-07-21 23:11:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  None of your poems are "too long". Keep writing well. I hope to see more great work from you.
| Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by Full Truth | [ Reply to This ]
  Kewl and simple like Full Truth said. Very poetic had 2 find a short poem cause you write alot of poems and they seem to be long. NEways it was a cool poem and keep up the good work. Peace & stay safe!
| Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
  I see what you mean. This was a simple poem to understand. It's not too long or short. It's just right.
| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by Full Truth | [ Reply to This ]


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