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    dots Submission Name: Angry at Medots
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    Author: darkeveris
    ASL Info:    19/F/Someplace silent
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 34/62/38
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsAngry at Medots
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    I get so depressed
    When I am mad
    I do not stop to restrain
    The feelings that I have

    I should not be this way
    In fact I have tried
    I wish there was a way
    My
    Anger
    Would
    Fuck off
    And die

    I am Angry at Anger
    Lost in obsession
    I will snap at anybody
    Who
    Opposes my words

    Angry at Anger
    Piss my self off
    Out bursts
    At the world

    I am sorry to every one
    Who had to deal with
    Me being angry
    At me

    Angry at Anger
    Is all that I could
    Be




    Submitted on 2006-07-21 23:25:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like that the format is very original, how far you spaced the most important words. unique. i guess accepting and writing and realizing that you're angry at yourself for being angry is the first step to overcoming the demon named anger. =]
    | Posted on 2006-07-21 00:00:00 | by MidnightMelody | [ Reply to This ]


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