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Upon your broken heart lies a cruel and thoughtless world You've taken so many chances to be a new girl You've done so many things that you've known you shouldn't do but you did them anyway just to be "COOL" You've got nothing left now you've screwed up big not even your purity forget the dang jigs! Now you've got a kid to fill your days and hours bored out of our wits you plan schemes to blow them into freaking bits but listen to me! listen to me, My Child forget the planning, the schemes you're being too wild!!! Stop this foolish nonsense! you're not thinking! I've been here all along but you had this idea of forsaking! I'll talk you back no matter what you've done just ask me back into your life and we've won |
I only saw 1 tiny typo, "I'll [talk] you back", but I believe you meant, "I'll take you back". Besides that, I enjoyed reading this poem. It seems like it might've been passionately written. To understand this poem: One must know how it is to lose a loved-one and hope for "their return". | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by Full Truth | [ Reply to This ] | |