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Moon Tears


Author: MidnightMelody
ASL Info:    18/f/US
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 44 /52 /55
Words: 83
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Average Vote:    2.0000
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Moon Tears



The silver moon drops shedding tears
from the malicious sun above
Oh, sorry come be near and nigh
yearning for the unwanted false love.

Speaking of waters and holes
there is yet a treasure beneath it all
living as a lie, by far a secret untold.

Expecting to hear the wailing cry
of broken heart and murders,
of unreality and serial killers,
all you hear is the plink! plink! plink! on
the silver tray you left in the sink.




Submitted on 2006-07-21 23:51:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow its good the words u used but also abit confusing at the same time its unclear what u are saying maybe re work it so it becomes more clear but good use of words
| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by dark silence | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good.
I got the idea of suicide from the ending stanza.
As the pills were taken the person could only hear the 'plink, plink' instead of what they normally here in the world today "of broken heart and murders,
of unreality and serial killers,"

If im right, this wasnt confusing it was just vague. Good write

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| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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