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    dots Submission Name: Junemarie's Songdots
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    Author: junemarie
    ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl.
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66/70/27
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 173
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this for my oldest daughter Junemarie, who like many of us has struggled with overwhelming heartbreak in the course of her life.


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    dotsJunemarie's Songdots
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    Photo---Junemarie and I, when we were much younger, and much happier.


    Your eyes as grey as the falling rain

    You no longer want to play

    Your face that now is filled with pain

    With memories of yesterday.



    Some of which were caused by me

    And the father that threw you away

    The years that followed in misery

    You were always the one to pay.



    The frenzied search for love you sought

    Was always a battle lost

    When precious pieces of you were broken

    It just wasn't worth the cost.



    You always were so true to yourself

    No compromise you gave

    You'd give and give to others

    Yet yourself you couldn't save.



    There is a love just waiting for you

    Just stand tall and strong

    Someday someone will SEE you

    And make your life a song.



    Until the end I’ll be with youYou are a part of me

    And I'm so proud to call you my own

    My girl, my Junemarie




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      Deeply sad and hopleful at the same time.

    It reads smoothly and sweetly in its sadness.

    The reader cannot help but feel the emotions of this.

    Nicely done,

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]



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