To the Death
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To the Death
I took his hand, he took my heart, and forever till end, nothing would tear us apart. But it all went downhill, on a road to misery. All empty and alone, I watched them invisibly. I witnessed a fake love, took a role in a life like play. I thought love was real, untill he went away. He still has my heart, keeps it in his mind with a few others. In my brain that he slows, on her lips that he smuthers. He's still killing my soul but I hope his life is perfect. and now opon my broken self, his lies have no affect. |
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| wow, i really like this poem, i can almost relate to this, cept my heart want broken this time.... i refused to even let him leave a scratch. i am gonna add this to my favs its a really good piece Bella | Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ] | wow i really liked this maybe because i can realate to it. tht and you wrote it really well. i could get the feeling off it really well. keep it up. | | Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by gothfreak | [ Reply to This ] | Very interesting because it relates to alot of people who have had their hearts broken. | Keep it up and you'll prolly be world famous someday. Signed, The Angel Of Hell | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by BloodtornAngel | [ Reply to This ] | i really like this and i can relate to it alot... | <3 Brittaney-Mae | Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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