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To the Death

Author: Mr. Creep
ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96 /177 /112
Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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To the Death

I took his hand,
he took my heart,
and forever till end,
nothing would tear us apart.
But it all went downhill,
on a road to misery.
All empty and alone,
I watched them invisibly.
I witnessed a fake love,
took a role in a life like play.
I thought love was real,
untill he went away.
He still has my heart,
keeps it in his mind with a few others.
In my brain that he slows,
on her lips that he smuthers.
He's still killing my soul
but I hope his life is perfect.
and now opon my broken self,
his lies have no affect.

Submitted on 2006-07-22 18:46:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, i really like this poem, i can almost relate to this, cept my heart want broken this time.... i refused to even let him leave a scratch.
i am gonna add this to my favs
its a really good piece

| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ]
  wow i really liked this maybe because i can realate to it. tht and you wrote it really well. i could get the feeling off it really well. keep it up.
| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by gothfreak | [ Reply to This ]
  Very interesting because it relates to alot of people who have had their hearts broken.
Keep it up and you'll prolly be world famous someday.
The Angel Of Hell
| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by BloodtornAngel | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like this and i can relate to it alot...

<3 Brittaney-Mae
| Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]

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