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    dots Submission Name: evolution of lyricsdots
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    Author: heavy knowledge
    ASL Info:    15/m/slidell, L.a.(N.O.)
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 106/156/34
    Words: 554
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 992
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 3406



    Description:
       just me, troy, and peter spitting that hot shit


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    dotsevolution of lyricsdots
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    (young p)
    You niggas tired
    I got the desire to write
    But when I write flames ignite
    Cuz my ink is hot fire
    You think you too fly Iíll sky ya
    I grasp the game with pliers but twist with a wrench
    I spit so much itís like sleeping in the rain Iíll leave you drenched
    Come with your trench
    Name your child Penny cuz you only got cents with no sense
    You stink check your scent
    Iíll leave you niggas bent
    You better watch for Clark cuz my last name is Kent
    You canít stand toe to toe with me, your feet broke
    Write so hot youíd fuck around and catch a heat stroke
    You a broke bloke
    You hanging in the closet, I would kill you for a coat

    Chorus x2
    Donít test us on this cipher we lyrical assassins
    Hearts bleeding on these beats with so much compassion
    Bringing back what we call Hip-Hop Poetry
    Our pens laying down classical songs uncontrollably

    (unknown solder)
    Lyrical assassins with the inferred scope aimed at you head
    I decided to spare your life and Iím gonna maim you instead
    I practice anarchy just to play games with the feds
    Leave your tombstone bare and no one remembers the names of the dead
    Sick of the lames with the dreads who go insane from the meds
    Loving the red dames who get they pussy slain in my bed
    Rappers flee when I enter, never ashamed that they fled
    They call me Frosty the Snow Pimp, getting brain in the sled
    I remain what you said cause Iím history in the making
    They say his story is never faking
    But now heís boring and forsaken cuz his gloryís what Iím taking
    Heís kinda gory when I break him
    Thrown from twelve stories to the pavement
    Emcees wear chains like this is the industryís enslavement
    You talk a lot but you never make a statement
    Fat asses giving up dough just to get cake as payment

    Chorus x2
    Donít test us on this cypher we lyrical assaians
    Hearts bleadin on these beats with so much compassion
    Bringin back what we call Hip-Hop Poetry
    Our pens laying down classical songs uncontrollably

    (heavy knowledge)
    Revolutionary institutionary contains lyrics of intelligence
    You got platinum sellin records but dat shit is irrelevance
    My style combine with my lyrics like H2O
    ÖÖNow thatís what you call an incredible flow
    Yaíll non-rappin lyrist still glued to your history
    Learn how to read time that shit is elementary
    Evolution of lyrics, Revolution of my sound
    Flow ridin on a black horse leavin you 6ft below the ground
    Even if I were dead and you were standin on my tomb
    You would still be beneath me cause me and Jesus shared the same womb
    A metropolis of people rhymin asymmetrically
    Couldnít be compared to you bet yet stand next to me
    Transforming instrumentals into instruments of war
    donít believe the lies that was just folk lore
    Born with sexual puns and metaphors entangling my body
    Livin live in the fast lane, while yaíll drivin Buicks and Iím drivin Maseraties
    Fead some food for though my umbilical cord
    Remembers you might be godís sheep but Iím kin to the lord





    Submitted on 2006-07-23 01:02:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      heavy knowledge verse was serious,
    it had the best flow too. Unnkown was right behind him or about even.

    his last line was on point. Some mispelling throughout the song but who the fuq cares about spellin...

    nice read

    PC
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmhmm lyrical assasians huh?? riiiiiight. let me stop i'm just messin. This was tight and ya'll know it so i'm not even gonna go on about how much i liked it and give ya'll big ass heads. It's not necssary. Just know i liked it and i want a free cd when all ya'll blow up.

    Lady D
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      this is tite
    you should b mixin on cds
    -marie
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by od9.1.04 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was kool, its def wot i call hip hop poetry, flow was tight and ur game waz on, cant wait to read the next one,
    shae x
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by shae_indauk | [ Reply to This ]
      that [censored] is tight do you guys have a cd
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by chuckles | [ Reply to This ]


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