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    dots Submission Name: don't let the days go bydots
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    Author: ariadne
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 99/85/26
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       don't look back on life with regret live it right now.


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    dotsdon't let the days go bydots
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    Donít let the days go by
    With out it ever floating up
    Donít take it to the grave
    Keep secrets donít let shame be why

    You look back on your life
    life started with everything right
    You would have kept it
    and never would have sought the knife

    ďDonít stand up on the bladeĒ
    how is that any way to live
    Itís not but it was mine
    Hate the stage but the part was played

    Before you start to fly
    Set the record so itís lucid
    Speak the truth not the lie
    Donít let the days go by




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