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Dedicated: 4 the one who tried to rape me


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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Words: 189
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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speaks for itself


Dedicated: 4 the one who tried to rape me



Dear you,

guess you've neva walked in my shoes
but 4 the most part i was in love wit u
i had 2 take a lot out and put a lot in
i forgave u but it's not forgotten
u see this feelin is a little like heartbreak
i had 2 give, what u had no buisness 2 take
would u'd stopped if u weren't frustrated
that's a thought i always contomplated
u gave me a choice, we could leave or we could stay
i just wasn't feeling giving "it" up that day
u see i didn't want someone who didn't love me
2 have their penis in my pussy
yet u held me down and tried and tried
as i tried 2 get you off me and cried
it wasn't till u realized the time, u stopped
but 2 late it couldn't stop my tear drops
D i still love you i always will
and it took a real thug 2 let my heart heal
i'm glad i fought with all my might
but yo i'ma still have a scar 4 life


love,
Lady D




Submitted on 2006-07-23 12:07:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this dude's a [censored]. real [censored]. u shoulda kicked that nigga in the nuts and that's something i usually wish on no man but he deserved it. i'm glad u fought too. ur nobody's sex toy...unless u wanna be. ur worth way more than a one night stand
| Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow thats kind of scary because the exact thing happened to me not to long ago. I definitley feel your pain, and sympathize. be glad nothing worse happened....It didn't right?
Signed,
The Angel of Hell
| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by BloodtornAngel | [ Reply to This ]
  Sorry you had to go through this and see such a bad side to the person you love.It was a really great wrtie and and painted a sad but clear picture.vary emotional and really make the reader feel for you.take care,Jamie x
| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by korn9426 | [ Reply to This ]


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