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    dots Submission Name: Dedicated: 4 the one who tried to rape medots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDedicated: 4 the one who tried to rape medots
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    Dear you,

    guess you've neva walked in my shoes
    but 4 the most part i was in love wit u
    i had 2 take a lot out and put a lot in
    i forgave u but it's not forgotten
    u see this feelin is a little like heartbreak
    i had 2 give, what u had no buisness 2 take
    would u'd stopped if u weren't frustrated
    that's a thought i always contomplated
    u gave me a choice, we could leave or we could stay
    i just wasn't feeling giving "it" up that day
    u see i didn't want someone who didn't love me
    2 have their penis in my pussy
    yet u held me down and tried and tried
    as i tried 2 get you off me and cried
    it wasn't till u realized the time, u stopped
    but 2 late it couldn't stop my tear drops
    D i still love you i always will
    and it took a real thug 2 let my heart heal
    i'm glad i fought with all my might
    but yo i'ma still have a scar 4 life


    love,
    Lady D




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      this dude's a [censored]. real [censored]. u shoulda kicked that nigga in the nuts and that's something i usually wish on no man but he deserved it. i'm glad u fought too. ur nobody's sex toy...unless u wanna be. ur worth way more than a one night stand
    | Posted on 2006-08-04 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow thats kind of scary because the exact thing happened to me not to long ago. I definitley feel your pain, and sympathize. be glad nothing worse happened....It didn't right?
    Signed,
    The Angel of Hell
    | Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by BloodtornAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry you had to go through this and see such a bad side to the person you love.It was a really great wrtie and and painted a sad but clear picture.vary emotional and really make the reader feel for you.take care,Jamie x
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by korn9426 | [ Reply to This ]


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