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Hamster Love

Author: junemarie
ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl.
Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66 /70 /27
Words: 40
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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Hamster Love

Photo...Amigo, a true friend. The keeper of my secrets

Hamsters Are:

H - Happy
A - Affectionate
M - Meticulous
S - Sweet
T - Tubular
E - Ever Moving
R - Renascent Runts

Submitted on 2006-07-23 14:41:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That was pretty cool. It was short and sweet and I didn't really see a point. I thought that you used good words to escribe hamsters and I think that it was pretty good. I had a hamster..once..but it's name was Cricket. It wsa cute but it always used to escape. That was when I was 5 or something. Keep Writing
| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]

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