Hamster Love

Author: junemarie ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl. Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66 /70 /27 Words: 40

Class/Type: Poetry /Happy Total Views: 969 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 272

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Hamster Love

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Photo...Amigo, a true friend. The keeper of my secrets Hamsters Are: H - Happy A - Affectionate M - Meticulous S - Sweet T - Tubular E - Ever Moving R - Renascent Runts

Submitted on 2006-07-23 14:41:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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That was pretty cool. It was short and sweet and I didn't really see a point. I thought that you used good words to escribe hamsters and I think that it was pretty good. I had a hamster..once..but it died..it's name was Cricket. It wsa cute but it always used to escape. That was when I was young..like 5 or something. Keep Writing ~caotic~

| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]

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