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Gate Keeper


Author: od9.1.04
ASL Info:    15/f/oh
Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 18 /38 /19
Words: 124
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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I wrote this for my mom.. who I lost on September 1, 2004.


Gate Keeper



I wonder
Why you decided
To leave me.
I wonder why
Your lifeless body
Is now empty.

There’s so much
I needed you
To hear.
It feels so long
But it’s only
Been a year.

You told me
I was your reason
For the life you live.
Then your in heaven
Smiling down
On your only kid.

She always
Made a point
To say she loves me.
I turned away
Cuz I was blind
My love she didn’t see.

For me the gate
I Hope she
Will open.

Her face is
The one I see
Im hopin’.

Her wings
Hold me
In her cover.
I lost my life
My love
My mother.




Submitted on 2006-07-23 15:20:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Awwwl cheyanne. This is really beautiful poem.. It has touched me... The last section

"Her wings
Hold me
In her cover.
I lost my life
My love
My mother"

That was the best section of the whole poem... Keep up the good work

Love,
R.Bayden
| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah, wow i liked it. strong poem. i agree with remedy bayden that the last section was the best. it brought the poem together in such a nice way.
| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by chottooni | [ Reply to This ]
  hey hun!! this is beautiful!! i kinda saw angels after i read it!! i love the last stanza!!

"Her wings
Hold me
In her cover.
I lost my life
My love
My mother"

that brough it together with an amazin flow! goodjob!
~akaila~
| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by secretmystery_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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