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Easy Ryder, Rides Again

Author: junemarie
ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl.
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Words: 113
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Easy Ryder, Rides Again

Photo-----My grandson Brody

The little guy around our house
Is cool beyond compare
As we put on his jacket and wooly cap
To get out for a breath of air.

Then no sooner we're out and driving
In our oh so conservative car
He sits in his Sleepy Ryder seat
And makes like a movie star.

Our Volvo soon becomes a bike
Which gobbles up the highway
While sun and wind whip through his hair?
He roars down every byway.

And he would race the wind forever
If his diaper weren't wet
Oh woe to the image you beget...
You Ryder of the diaper set!

Submitted on 2006-07-23 15:32:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Comments kids always fell fast asleep as soon as we drove anywhere (thank God LOL)

That was a looong time ago for me! Expect I'll have a couple of grand kids to enjoy within the next couple of years though. My daughter is getting married in July of 2007 & my son will be a senior in HS this year. Both have the potential to make me a Grandma at any time...hopefully not TOO soon (for their daughter still has 4 years of dental school to attend and my son's girlfriend is only 16 & a Junior in HS) but I know it will happen in the forseeable future.

Hope you are enjoying sure seems as though you are!

Take care,

| Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
  This is delightful! The last stanza really gives me the feeling of wanting to ride on my motorcycle for a few more miles, but I just have to change my diaper. I wish it were longer. :)

| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by littleshuford | [ Reply to This ]

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