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Unspoken


Author: junemarie
ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl.
Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66 /70 /27
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Society
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Unspoken



I dare not speak my thoughts aloud.
I've not the nerve to venture there.
Yet in my secret dreams, I've found
I do not fear my heart laid bare.




Submitted on 2006-07-23 23:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  What a wonderful minimalist-style poem! So much said in so few words (if only our comments could share the same fate...lol...Jimmy makes us type more than we need to at times...)

If dreams tell the truth though...I'm in trouble (LOL)

The new medication that I am taking (Nefazodone) causes me to experience more REM sleep and to have and recall more vivid dreams lately...I wake up wondering, sometimes, what is really going on in my head and why I dream the things that I do...

Anyway... nice piece!

Take care,

Barbara
| Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
  another one,I love the way you say so much with just a few words.This poem is also a great poem and I think there will be alot of people that will be able to relate to this.great write.
Jamie x
| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by korn9426 | [ Reply to This ]


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