Victim Of Love

Author: junemarie ASL Info:    62,F, Port Richey, Fl. Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 66 /70 /27 Words: 53

Class/Type: Poetry /Love Total Views: 1154 Average Vote:    4.0000 Bytes: 336

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Victim Of Love

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Victim of love I see a broken heart You've got your story to tell. Victim of love It's such an easy part And you know how to play it so well. I think you know what I mean You're walking the wire Of pain and desire Looking for love in between.

Submitted on 2006-07-24 00:44:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This was nice...it felt very...tragic...to me. As though love is only pain but the person still remains hopeful that one day they will find something different...

| Posted on 2006-07-31 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]

short but sweet,this is a great poem and it says so much in just a few powerful words.very well written,its great that you can make it mean so much and say all that it says without going on and on about the same thin.striaght to the point,I love it. Jamie x

| Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by korn9426 | [ Reply to This ]

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