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    dots Submission Name: Angels Have Entereddots
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    Author: Foreseer
    ASL Info:    20/F/In Love
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 156/86/23
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1081
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    Description:
       Kind of different from other poems I've posted.


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    dotsAngels Have Entereddots
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    The night is warm and silent,
    with the moon shining bright.
    That's the sign;
    angels have entered.
    Pure and silent.
    Faces of innocence.
    Feathers of light.
    Voices of truth.
    Eyes of gold.
    These angels have entered
    from Heaven to Earth.




    Submitted on 2006-07-24 02:09:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this one...it kind of has a calming effect...i dunno but its good so good job and keep writing!

    Brittany
    | Posted on 2006-07-29 00:00:00 | by dark_secrets_ | [ Reply to This ]


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