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    dots Submission Name: Echoesdots
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    Author: Ensult
    ASL Info:    19/Male/New York
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 115/114/31
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 2098
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    Description:
       This poem talks about my personal struggles as a child.


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    dotsEchoesdots
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    I'm crying, I'm crying
    Shouting is all I hear
    Profanity screeches against the walls and swurves arond the doorway to my sensitive ears
    Breaking glass shatters the echoes
    The noise is nonsense
    My brothers drunk again
    Mom won't kick out her oldest son
    Dad doesn't wanna raise a bum
    And me
    I'm the observer
    My eyes see all
    Papa can't stand from working to hard
    Mom has an affair while he sleeps
    Brother sticks a needle in his vein while she's "occupied/ going for a walk/ going to the beauty salon"
    Same shit different day
    All I hear is echoes.




    Submitted on 2004-05-17 17:30:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this really seems like ramblings, you seem to have literally put everything down as it came to you, with no rhyme or rythm. work on it.
    | Posted on 2004-05-17 00:00:00 | by DrunkProfet | [ Reply to This ]


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