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    dots Submission Name: Flydots
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    Author: Jose Ragnos
    Elite Ratio:    3.49 - 23/23/27
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 181
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1022



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    Free me my love and let me take flight,
    Fly me high above into the night.
    Let my arms hold you never letting go,
    Like we are frozen in the thickest of snow.

    Tears form in my eyes when I hear you weep,
    Whispering my name as you fall asleep.
    It takes two wings for a bird to fly,
    Without you beside me I would surly die.

    Yearning for your touch my hand reaches out to you,
    Being there with you to see it threw.
    Do not turn away, thinking I would leave,
    Would a kiss on your lips make you believe?

    Nothing can make me hate you in anyway,
    Furious probably, and I would have nothing to say.
    However, I know you will not treat me so,
    Our love for each other will always glow.

    Fear not if you feel I will run away,
    Holding you tight will show you I will stay.
    If you look behind your shoulder I will be there,
    When you see me you will se how much I care.




    Submitted on 2006-07-24 15:02:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It is here I can see the difference between real love and passion/obsession :| Such a "warm feeling" I guess...
    | Posted on 2007-01-05 00:00:00 | by Non-Sens-Uality | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nicely written poem. it gives a sense of love, and a very good sense of caring. You also use very good imagery, especially in line four in the first stanza "Like we are frozen in the thickest of snow". Keep up the good work.

    R.Bayden
    | Posted on 2006-08-08 00:00:00 | by remedy bayden | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written :) A lot of thought and feelings were put into this poem. Lucky girl!

    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by fallen_angl_2 | [ Reply to This ]



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