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    dots Submission Name: The Death Of Charlotte (the Spider)dots
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    Author: darkeveris
    ASL Info:    19/F/Someplace silent
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 34/62/38
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Death Of Charlotte (the Spider)dots
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    Sitting in this corner,
    Clothed in cobwebs.
    Alone in darkness,
    Spiders are my life.
    All left behind,
    Exept the images withheld,
    The pain I lived.
    Anger that courses,
    Through cold viens,
    Blurs my vision.
    Sitting on cement,
    I start my massacre.
    One at a time,
    Spiders start to die,
    Legs twiching on the ground.




    Submitted on 2006-07-24 20:41:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm this is an okay poem kinda didn't like it! Um didn't give a good visual! And I am still sad Charlotte had 2 die...
    | Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      kool this i sa kool poem its
    is it about that spider from charlotes web?
    i like the end it rocked


    fana
    | Posted on 2006-07-24 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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