Description: It's not finished but I thought I would write about how disgusting I find celebrities these days. After alot of months thinking I was fat and unnatural, I finally came to the conclusion that it's not me who is unnatural it is the people we look to, to set an example who are unnatural.
All comments welcome!!!!
Skinny Leg Jeans -------------------------------------------
I know what you think
When you look at me
Judging my appearance
Only what you can see
I may not be fashionable
I may not be cool
At least I dress comfortably
You look like a fool
Don't call me fat
You can't win this fight
Take a look in the mirror
Those jeans you're wearing
Are way to tight.
Tink This is a Great start to something that despertly needs to be said To many young woman and even children are using this anorexic woman as role models and getting deathly sick and even dying to try and look like these so called beautiful woman Great Job I hope you add more to this becausde this could definately become a masterpiece God Bless Your Friend Ron
Please keep in touch I have recently posted some new writes if you get a chance Please let me know what you think Take Care Ron
I really enjoyed this piece. It so weird that everywhere you look there are this freakin anorexic skinny people. It's really stupid . . . . . . . . . . . and some of the magazines are also idiotic for putting only skinny people in there.
Anyways . . . . . . you did a great job.
oh . . . . by the way . . . . . .you were wrong. . . . . this is a good piece. . . . . it's very realistic.
Its a good start but I feel you could go way farther with this? Anyway don't give up on this one. The world needs to hear this!!! We all get side tracked on how we are supose to look like, myself encluded. Great start now bring it how with some pride and tell the word its ok to be yourself. Kelley Frost
poetically this isnt anything spectacular but your point is perfect and im glad you tackled it. im glad you tackled it coz there are so many girls who live with the same ideas in their heads... the same pressure to be a certain way, act a certain way, look a certain way to the point of making themselves sick over it...
now... me... i LOVE the skinny leg jeans look... you know the 80s rocker look though i could never pull it off so i wont try... ill stick to my eclecticness thank you very much but i do understand what you are saying and im really glad you are saying it...
i am glad you are comfortable in yourself to make such a bold statement as this... big ups to you!