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    dots Submission Name: Ritter von Dunkelheit Knight of Darknessdots

    Author: chottooni
    ASL Info:    19/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 5/4/4
    Words: 325
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       first poem i wrote. ask me what it means if you wish to know.

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    dotsRitter von Dunkelheit Knight of Darknessdots

    ich bin pflockfuss jay
    oder seussholzraspler typ
    komm du mit kein angst
    komm auf mein shiff

    ich bringe schmerz
    kummer und grausamkeit
    aber nicht vom herz
    wohnt mein dunkelheit
    der arger brechen aus mein kopf
    ach alles ist still und ruhig
    bleiben sie so ich hoff
    leben ist ja billig

    ich bin der reiter von ross
    es war so prachtig weiss
    bis ich aufgeschlossen das schloss
    jetzt schwarz, ich weiss

    du bist mein ein und alles
    mein kleines maus
    mein lieb von dir ist klares
    das licht ist geradeaus


    i am peg foot jay
    or a sweet talker guy
    come with no fear
    come on my boat

    i bring pain
    sorrow and cruelty
    but not of the heart
    lives my darkness
    anger breaks out of my head
    oh everything is quiet and calm
    stay that way i hope
    yeah life is cheap

    i am the rider of the horse
    it was so splendidly white
    until i unlocked the lock
    (i know its out of order but its for the poems sake)
    now its black, i know

    you are my one and only
    my little mouse
    my love for you is clear
    the light is straight ahead

    Submitted on 2006-07-24 22:03:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's god i think it could have had a better flow.the meaning was strong though and thats what will keep people reading.thats what grabbed my attention the most.

    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by bbcherry | [ Reply to This ]

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