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    dots Submission Name: Doing Timedots
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    Author: Gravitic
    ASL Info:    20/m/tn
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 28/30/8
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
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    dotsDoing Timedots
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    I remember times I had
    some were happy, some were sad
    memories me and my partners in crime
    throwing up a thousand times

    I got through it, I feel fine
    I went to school and did my time
    In a sense I'm out, in a sense I'm free
    to be what I wanna be

    Fun was cartoons Saturdays
    Fun was staying up past eight
    lame was tring to fit in
    lame was the wrong crowd let me it

    I got through it, I feel fine
    I went to school and did my time
    In a sense I'm out, in a sense I'm free
    to be what I wanna be

    You gotta stick together
    with who you are and who you know
    You gotta remember
    Where you've been and where you wanna go

    I never did homework after school
    did all the things I thought were cool
    went out every Friday night
    I still do and I'm alright.




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